Monday, October 6, 2014


M. L. West, The Epic Cycle: A Commentary on the Lost Troy Epics. Oxford; New York: Oxford University Press, 2013. Pp. ix, 334. ISBN 9780199662258. $150.00.

Reviewed by Patrick O'Sullivan, University of Canterbury, New Zealand (

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Martin West's study of the lost Trojan epics is another major contribution of this scholar to Classics in a career spanning well over half a century. As the subtitle makes clear, this commentary does not deal with the Theban saga, or the fragments of other epic poems, such as the Heraclea of Panyassis or the Theseis. Instead, the focus is on those poems, apart from the Iliad and Odyssey, which complete the entire Trojan saga and its aftermath. Such poems include episodes ranging from Zeus' Malthusian decision to cause the war at Troy (and Thebes) to relieve Earth of excessive human population in the Cypria—the world's first-known prequel—to the death of Odysseus as recounted in the Telegony

In the preface West announces that he intends to go beyond analyzing specific fragments and testimonia; he also aims to reconstruct the general narratives of the lost epics (cf. also pp. 51-4). To do this he relies, inevitably, but not solely, on the prose summaries we have from Proclus' Chrestomathy; but he also takes into account what ancient literature and art depicting the same stories can tell us about the cyclic epics. The commentary, then, is broad in scope, and is all the more engaging as a result. Naturally, there will be moments when readers will disagree with some of West's reconstructions. But, as a whole, this work is a model of clarity, full of scholarly insights and showing command of a vast range of material combined with plausible analysis. As the first of its kind, this commentary greatly enhances our understanding of these important and influential, if sparsely preserved, poems.

In the wide-ranging introduction we find an excellent preparation for the commentary ahead. It explores many issues and themes generally that receive more specific treatment in each of the six chapters which follow—one for each of the six Trojan cyclic epics (Cypria, Aethiopis, Little Iliad, Iliou Persis, Nostoi, Telegony). West suggests that our major sources for the Cycle, Proclus' Chrestomathy and Apollodorus' Bibliotheke, derive their accounts from digests of the cyclic epics datable to the Hellenistic period. But West interestingly attempts to trace the formation of these epics as a 'Cycle' beyond the Hellenistic period to the shadowy mid-fourth-century figure Phayllos, mentioned by Aristotle (Rhet. 1417a15) as putting together a succinct summary of 'the Cycle', which the philosopher compares to Odysseus' summary (ἀπόλογος) of his adventures to Penelope on his return (cf. Od. 23.310-41). By 'cyclic' poetry West means poems designed to form a segment of a vaster narrative sequence, filling in areas not covered by existing epic poems, such as the Iliad and Odyssey, both of which can be considered free-standing and complete in themselves (p. 17, cf. p. 20).

West also points out that the cyclic poems are not all cast in the same mould: the Aethiopis appears to have been more unified than, say, the Cypria, in its continuation of the Iliad and in completing the story of Achilles. Nor were all the cyclic epics created ex nihilo after the Iliad and Odyssey had achieved pre-eminence; rather, what eventually became the Epic Cycle is based on oral poems, existing in somewhat fluid form, dating to the eighth and seventh centuries BC (pp. 21-6).

The introduction also deals generally with such issues as ascriptions and authorship and the methodological difficulties of attempting reconstructions of lost material through later literature or artworks (pp. 40-47). Many would baulk altogether at using iconographic material to reconstruct lost literature, but West is right in my view to consider what light such material can shed on at least some lost epics. While remaining cautious, he plausibly entertains the possibility of allusions to certain lost epics in scenes or figures that ordinarily would have no 'organic' connection to each other, but appear together on an artifact, when they are notable features of a lost epic. One example is a painting of the Judgment of Paris by the Kadmos Painter of c. 420 (= LIMC Eris 7) which on an upper level includes Eris and Themis in conversation, figures who feature in the Cypria (Arg. 1a, cf. Arg. 1b), but otherwise are not connected to each other.

Treatment of each poem is initially divided into sections dealing with issues of its attestation in ancient literature and art, authorship, date, the scope of its contents and its relation to the great Homeric epics. Then follow the fragments and commentaries. The texts are not translated; West recommends using the translations that appeared in his Loeb edition of the Greek epic fragments in 2003. A few notable differences emerge between this commentary and the Loeb edition: for instance, Cypria Fr. 29a and F 14 of the Nostoi do not appear in the Loeb edition. Elsewhere, West has revised his thinking on a few points since 2003, and shows an admirable willingness to reassess his earlier published work on the Cycle (see pp. 238-9 where he critiques one of his emendations to Arg. 3b of the Iliou Persis).

Considerations of space prevent a detailed account of West's commentaries, but a few points are worth mentioning all the same. West shares Aristotle's view (Poet. 1458a37) that both the Cypria and Little Iliad are episodic (πολυμερῆ); and this is perhaps to be expected at least of the former poem, which is designed to bring the hearer/reader up to speed on the first nine years of the Trojan war. West discusses textual problems in the Cypria, suggesting occasional emendations, and notes ways in which the poet not only reflects the language of Homer and Hesiod but also displays novelty in adapting the older poets' formulae (e.g. F 10.6, cf. Hesiod, Th. 413; Il. 14.204; etc.). Interesting speculations abound here, and West toys with historicizing readings on occasion (p. 93, 116), as well as noting the poem's influence on Pindar, among others (p. 106, etc.).

West dates the Aethiopis to the late seventh century, considering it to predate the Odyssey and restates his view that it is one of the more unified of the cyclic epics, with the events leading up to the death of Achilles as its central theme; this, he suggests, has its roots in two earlier compositions dealing separately with Memnon and Penthesileia which become combined into what we know as the Aethiopis today. He sees Memnon as a post-Iliadic figure, (pp. 145-6) and rightly points out that claims that the Iliad borrows many of its motifs from the Aethiopis—so much a hallmark of Neoanalytical scholarship—can be just as plausibly reversed.

Aristotle's view of the disjointed nature of the Little Iliad is reiterated by West (p. 169), and he posits a 'programme' of events over a twelve-day period to cover all the major episodes at Troy from the contest over the armour of Achilles to the Sack. Despite its evidently episodic structure, West nevertheless attractively suggests a unifying trajectory throughout the poem that begins with the despair of the Greeks over the death of Achilles and suicide of Ajax and ends with the Greeks triumphant at the sack of Troy. Like other scholars, West also sees the Little Iliad as somewhat unusual within the Epic Cycle in its inclusion of earthy, light-hearted elements, such as the Greeks' deciding to let an overheard discussion between two Trojan girls decide who should win Achilles' arms. From this he infers a later playful reworking of the older epic tradition. Such elements are undeniably present in the poem, but as early as the Iliad Homer could display earthy humour, such as in book 14 in Hera's comical seduction of Zeus, or the obnoxious Ajax, son of Oïleus slipping over in the footrace during Patroklos' funeral games and ending up with a mouthful of cow-dung. It is surprising then, that West wishes to delete χέσαιτο γάρ, εἰ μαχέσαιτο from Little Iliad F 2, in which one of the two girls discussing who should get Achilles' armour mentions that a woman 'would shit herself if she fought' in battle. The fact that Aristophanes in his Knights (1057) quotes this part of the fragment might also weaken the case for deletion or emendation here.

In contrast, the possibly older Iliou Persis shows no sign of light-heartedness, at least in its scanty remains, and West suggests that it never achieved wide currency, thus prompting the poet of Little Iliad to compose a new account of the Sack.

The Nostoi would seem to be another episodic cyclic epic, integrating several narratives of various heroes' returns from Troy, including Agamemnon, Menelaos and Neoptolemos; the poet, it is suggested, would abruptly change from one narrative to the next to create the original cliff-hangers. West sees in this poem a close engagement with the Odyssey and dates both to the late seventh century; he also sees, if not the same poet for both, then extensive contacts between the composers to explain the narrative and structural parallels (p. 250). Among these West argues for a Nekuia scene to parallel that in Odyssey 11; on this reading, the Nostoi has Menelaos encountering the ghost of his murdered brother, who tells him the wretched tale of his homecoming. While generic connections between the two poems undoubtedly exist, they could be explained by a poet working under the influence of the Odyssey, which arguably had attained its pre-eminence decades, if not generations, earlier; it does not seem necessary to me to see the poems as coeval or by the same hand.

Discussion of the Telegony by Eugammon concludes with a fascinating conjecture that Odysseus' original death was not at the hands of his son Telegonos, who stabbed him with a spear that had the barb of a sting-ray as its point (Proclus Arg. 4; cf. F 5). Since antiquity, with the notable exception of Aristarchus, this was considered to be what the Homeric Teiresias was referring to when he prophesied that Odysseus' 'mild death' (θάνατος ... ἀβληχρὸς) would come from the sea (Odyssey 11.134-7). West, however, noting that pain caused by a sting-ray barb is anything but mild, argues that Teiresias is referring to an event described in the Psychagogoi (F 275) by Aeschylus in which a heron defecates on the bald head of an ageing Odysseus; the hero's death is caused by a fish barb contained in the bird's droppings which poisons his scalp. Such a demise, according to West, also conforms to a number of folktale traditions in Greece and elsewhere in which the form of death is posited as a riddle. The death at the hands of Telegonos is, following this reading, a post-Homeric invention by Eugammon to add grandeur to Odysseus' demise, and elevate him from his original folk-tale status as a trickster to one of the great heroes of the Trojan saga.

Any reconstruction of material as fragmentary as the (Trojan) Epic Cycle will contain much that is speculative, and West admits that at least one of his attempts may stretch credulity (p. 281-2); elsewhere he appears overly reliant on select sources, such as Pausanias, in his bid to reconstruct the final events of Little Iliad (pp. 212-22). Yet there is much that is plausible and insightful in this rich and valuable work, since so much of the discussion is informed by a formidable erudition which sits lightly on its author. The writing is clear and engaging, the quality of proofreading high; typos are rare and innocuous (e.g. on p. 142 n. 15; on p. 202 read Plato Republic 493d, not 439d). Students and scholars will derive great benefit from West's labours, for his convenient collection and analysis of the ancient source material for the Cycle (e.g., attestations in literature and art), as much as for his wide-ranging and coherent treatment of the Cycle overall. English readers could hardly ask for a better synoptic analysis of the endlessly fascinating remains of this corpus of poetry, which will form the basis for future discussions of the Cycle for decades to come.

1 comment:

  1. While the review justly praises the erudition shown in this book, it does not comment on one of its limitations. The book refers here and there to comparisons with Sanskrit epic, notably by directing readers to West's Indo-European Poetry and Myth (2007). However, these comparisons bear on details – narrative atoms as it were, and ignore large-scale structures. This is a pity.
    As I have discussed elsewhere, similarities linking Greek epic tradition (Homer plus Cycle) with the Mahābhārata extend well beyond details. The Trojan War falls into five phases distinguished by the leaders of the losing side: Hector and Sarpedon are followed by Penthesilea, Memnon and Eurypylus, while during the Sack the defenders lack an effective leader. In the Sanskrit the losers in the Great War are led on the battlefield by four successive marshals; and again the main fighting ends with a nocturnal massacre in an enclosure. Even without further elaboration, the shared framework suggests that both traditions developed from a common origin that described a five-phase war. If the Cyclic poems derived from Einzellieder, the latter in turn must have derived from something more comprehensive.
    Though it is deeply entrenched in Anglophone classics, the unwillingness to engage with such comparisons discourages younger generations from pursuing questions that are not only perfectly legitimate but also offer scope for exciting discoveries.